The bottomless pitAnd there I was thinking things couldn't get worse…The bottomless pit by faredmllm
Huddled up in the darkness looking for warmth…
The soil mixed with red tears of thick blood; and the scent of death is everywhere…
What a fool I am…
Thinking we have reached the bottom of the pit called life…
When the ground shock from under us…
And All hell broke loose…
Again we fall…
Will this ever end?
NIGHTS OF DARKNIGHTS OF DARK by faredmllm
i wake up at the middle of the night
i look around can't see the light
i get a pounding urge to sit up and shout
... shout... scream sounds more right
but my voice seems stifled by the tears in my eyes
my breath hardly leaves my chest... silence
silence as thick as the mud in my mouth
i take a deep breath seems heavy with the scent of death
sit up straight maybe i'll awake
will i ever awake
ever... Never... someone, anyone, WHERE ARE THE SOLDIERS OF LIGHT
the heavy stench of bodies lurks in my dizzy head
those whom have fallen yet I've never met
we will walk together on the path towards the light
may those left behind have more light in the darkest of nights
A Writing Tip For Today A Writing Tip For Today's GenerationA Writing Tip For Today by tina-go-lightly
Our literary ancestors were alcoholics for a reason. Perhaps drinking will enable you to form better ideas. If actual consumption of the alcohol does not help, at the very least you will have an excellent starter fluid for incinerating your rubbish.
Suggestion: Absinthe, the green fairy and patron saint of writing.
Aside from actually developing what those in the business call 'talent', your only alternative is to continue writing crap. You may be able to get something published, but be warned that the vast majority of the public does not have discriminating taste. They like what the media tells them to like and mediocrity is in fashion, in true socialist hypocrisy.
Translation: Publication does not necessarily equal talent.
Your ill-conceived idea is likely nothing more than the brainchild of a drunken one night stand with